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Moolick needs commas

O.K., I’ve had enough. I don’t mind Richard T. Moolik’s W.W.F. approach to letter writing. It can be quite entertaining. But his sentence structure, like his facts, is fractured and incomplete. Richard, please purchase a copy of William Strunk’s “Elements of Style” and pay close attention to the section on the proper use of commas. It pains me to see the subtleties of your wry wit lost in a string of misplaced stops and starts. After all, as you have so constructively pointed out to all us chickens, ignorance (or is it intelligence) is a terrible thing to waste.

Rhetorically Yours

Bryan Zukowski

Glenwood Springs

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